Learning Intentions for Science
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Literacy
As part of our rocky shore unit we will also use our literacy skills to read and learn about the rocky shore and to write an information report on a rocky shore creature.
Writing
We are learning to write an information report about an animal.
We are learning to use our writing skills across the curriculum.
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Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Friday, 6 April 2018
Rocky Shore Recount
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Kia ora Nathan
ReplyDeleteWell done for writing your recount about our trip. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed exploring the rock pools and looking at all the creatures. It was good to see that you sequenced your events and talked about what we did. You next step is to make your writing more interesting by describing things more. Think about smell, taste, sounds, sights, feel. I would like to see you using some more interesting words in your writing. Ka pai.