Hi Nathan, I like how you described everything you would like to put in the magic box. I liked how there was correct spelling and punctuation. Next time maybe you shouldn't have a picture for everything. From Charlie.
Hi Nathan, I like your poem. It’s cool. This is really good work. I also like the pictures. I like all the writing in it. It made me feel good and want to keep reading, because of all your ideas. I think that you could make the writing a bit bigger, so it's easier to read. Keep up the good work.
Hi Nathan, I like how you described everything you would like to put in the magic box. I liked how there was correct spelling and punctuation. Next time maybe you shouldn't have a picture for everything.
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Hi Nathan. I like your magic box poem. I liked the bit about the chocolate melting on the camp fire. Did you enjoy writing this poem? From Eamon.
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ReplyDeleteI like your poem. It’s cool. This is really good work. I also like the pictures.
I like all the writing in it. It made me feel good and want to keep reading, because of all your ideas.
I think that you could make the writing a bit bigger, so it's easier to read. Keep up the good work.