Descriptive Writing

At the moment in class, we have been working on descriptive writing. We have been using pictures to give us ideas of what to write about. Here is a piece of writing I did.😀

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Bright City

Bright City is a massive abandoned city in the centre of a dark Kakariki jungle. Bright City was built and led by the king of Bright Bombers. Bright Bombers are people that look just like normal humans but they have rainbow clothes and they are 3 feet shorter.

The king forced the Bright Bombers to build a city better than Bob the builder. Instantly the Bright Bombers started to collect materials and then they started to build faster than a speeding bullet. After 7 years the city was finally finished. The king said to them that they are superhumans. 76 years later their city had gotten 19 times bigger than it was before.

One day suddenly the king's enemies flew over the city in big high tech fighter jets, their army was called the Dark Bombers.  The Bright Bombers knew at once that war was coming.

The king started to wonder why the Dark Bombers were attacking his city but he had no time to think about that because he was in the war against the Dark Bombers.

The Bright Bombers sped over to the military base they had just recently built. When they arrived they got into their massive war tanks and Jets.

The Bright Bombers in the tanks tried to shoot down the jets but they were five times faster than a bullet train.

Suddenly a group of tanks smashed through the walls and gates straight away the Bright Bombers shot the tanks and BANG!  the tanks were gone out of sight. The Bright Bombers in the jets were fighting as hard as they can but the Dark Bombers were war machines and the Bright Bombers could not fight anymore. Eventually, every single Bright Bomber abandoned the gigantic dark invaded city. BANG! A quarter of the city blew up and half of the Bright Bomber’s population was gone.