For Sea Week we wrote about why the ocean is important. Here is my writing work. Please leave a kind, positive and thoughtful comment. Slides change every 10 seconds.😶😳😉😮😏😃😊.
Hi Nathan. I enjoyed reading and watching your presentation on why the ocean is important. I like the way you have combined the animation with your writing. I can see you have worked hard on this. Well done. Love Mum.
Hello Nathan I liked how you putt effort to make this slide and the writing that you did was awesome. Also you paragraphs were perfect. Maybe next time you could put more pictures rather than GIF.
Hi Nathan. I enjoyed reading and watching your presentation on why the ocean is important. I like the way you have combined the animation with your writing. I can see you have worked hard on this. Well done. Love Mum.
ReplyDeleteHi Mum, its Nathan. thank you for the comment on my work ;) Thank you :)
DeleteHello Nathan I liked how you putt effort to make this slide and the writing that you did was awesome. Also you paragraphs were perfect.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could put more pictures rather than GIF.
Hi Caleb, its Nathan. Thank you for your comment on my sea week work. Thank you for your helpful comment ;)
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